The
Merrow
The
fog closed in faster than Mallory had thought. She had been wandering on the
Irish moor when she realized that a fog was approaching. Before she could get
far towards where she and her mother were staying, she was completely enveloped
in a thick, soupy mist. Bewildered, Mallory tried to continue on her way home,
but was soon completely lost, without any sense of direction at all. The fog
completely closed out any sign of the sky, and it was impossible to see any
landmarks.
Fearfully
looking around, Mallory shivered. The wind whipped her dress about her ankles
and tore at her shawl. Grabbing her cap to keep it from blowing away, she
desperately peered through the mist, trying to find a way out. Despondently
sitting on the ground, she pulled her shawl about her.
“Oh, why
did I have to go exploring today?” she lamented aloud. “Now I’m lost, cold, and
oh, so afraid!” Wrapping her shawl around her, she shivered. Her fear had worn
her out, and she was soon nodding. Slowly she fell asleep, exhausted.
Mallory
woke with a start. It was still day, but the mist had gotten darker, it seemed.
The wind was no longer blowing, giving Mallory the feeling that she would be
able to find her way out of the fog soon. Gathering her courage, she decided
that it was better to be walking and trying to find a way back , rather than
just sitting and waiting for night. Choosing a direction, she walked steadily
onward.
After what
seemed like hours, she was almost to the point of tears. Where was she? Would
she ever find her way out? Narrowing her eyes and clenching her teeth, she
marched resolutely on, determined not to give in to despair.
Suddenly
she heard something. Stopping and listening intently, Mallory realized that it
was the sound of a pipe! Someone was playing “Londonderry Air” on a pipe! With
new resolution and energy, Mallory joyfully followed the sound.
Danny
O’Keefe, an Irish lad of nineteen, sat playing his pipe not far from his
cottage, when the form of a girl suddenly materialized out of the mist in front
of him. Startled, he dropped his pipe and jumped to his feet, staring at the
girl. His keen black eyes took in her windblown hair, the way she clutched her
shawl about her, the cap with a red feather held in her hand. A cap with a red
feather! Slowly, Danny spoke. “Who be ye?”
Looking
somewhat bewildered, the girl took a breath. “I-I’m Mallory,” she stammered. “I
got lost in the fog, and I can’t find my way back. Please help me.”
Picking up
his pipe, Danny motioned through the mist. “Sure, ye gave me a start just now.
But there’s the house, an’ we’ll take ye in fer now. I’ll go get me
gran’mither.”
Turning,
he tore into the cottage, leaving the girl in the mist. Startled, his
grandmother turned from the pot she was stirring, as she burst in the door.
“Sure an’
ye’ll be the death of me yit, lad! What’s the fuss aboot now, Danny?” she
scolded.
“Gran’mither,” Danny burst out excitedly, “There’s a girl who
has a cap with a read feather in it out there! She says she’s lost.”
The old
woman opened her eyes wide. “Well, lad, why didn’t ye bring her in? We don’t
want her dissapearin’, now! Ah, Erin O’Keefe will not give up her chance to see
a merrow before she dies!” She shooed Danny out the door. “Go! Invite her in,
before she runs away!”
As Danny vanished into the mist, Erin
murmured to herself. “Aye, it’s meself would be the last one to turn a merrow
from the door. A merrow! A true mermaid! Ah, ‘tis a lucky day for sure.”
Little Pat, a boy of nine, who was sitting
and playing with sticks by the fireplace, heard every word, and his eyes got
big and round with wonder.
“Grandmither, is she a merrow, like your
stories?”
Erin whirled around to face the little
boy. “Now Pat, perhaps she is, but if ye want to find out, ye’ll not go askin’
her.”
The boy nodded and returned to his play.
Mallory was feeling better now that she
had had supper and was with some friendly people. The two boys kept staring at
her though, which unsettled her a little bit. Still, she decided to ask help to
find her way back home.
“I thank you for your kindness to me, a
stranger. But I am still lost. Do you think you
could help me find my way home?” She looked pleadingly at Erin.
The old woman nodded and smiled knowingly.
“Ah, but sure, where is yer home?”
Mallory bit her lip and her mind raced.
She could not remember the name of the village she and her mother were staying at,
and she certainly didn’t know which direction it was in. Wait! She had been
exploring on some hills that overlooked the sea.
“The—the sea,” she stammered. “If you
could take me somewhere where I could see the ocean, I am sure I could find my
way home.”
A knowing look passed between Danny and
Erin, but Mallory didn’t notice it. She looked at them again. “Could you take
me there?”
Danny spoke up, for the first time since
supper. “Ah, tis too late now. Bide the night, and we’ll take ye in the
mornin’.”
Breathing a sigh of relief, Mallory smiled
gratefully. “Oh, I’m indebted to you. Thank you, all of you.”
Erin showed Mallory a place to sleep, and
Mallory was very soon asleep, since she was weary from her fright. She left her
cap and shawl in the main room of the cottage.
After Pat, also, had fallen asleep, Erin
and Danny discussed Mallory in excited, yet hushed, tones.
“I’m sure she’s a merrow, Grandmither,”
Danny eagerly declared. “Did ye ever see a fairer colleen? An’ she said the sea
when ye asked her where her home was.”
Erin shrugged. “It seems to me ye have
your mind made up. We shall see when we take her to the sea.”
Danny jumped to his feet, forgetting
caution. “Take her to the sea, Gran’mither! Sure, that’s just askin’ her to
leave! I want her to stay!”
Erin smiled. “Well, since you’re so set on
it, there’s only one way to make a merrow stay with ye. Take her cap.”
Looking down, Danny placed his hand in his
chin. “Ah, but I don’t want to be her master. She’s so beautiful and free.”
Erin Looked off into the distance. “Sure,
then leave her her cap.”
Frustrated, Danny thoughtfully stroked his
chin, which was beginning to show evidence of a beard. “I just don’t know.”
The next morning Mallory was up with the
sun. The fog was gone, and she realized that she had wandered so far she could
see no familiar landmarks. Returning back to the cottage, she ate breakfast
quickly and declared to Erin that she was ready to leave.
“Ah, sure, an’ just gather your things.
We’ll be off after that,” the old woman smiled.
Mallory went over to where she had left
her belongings. Soon she let out a small cry. “My cap! It’s gone!” She rushed
over to Erin. “My favorite cap is gone! Can you help me find it?”
Erin looked at her critically. “Sure, an’
why do you want this cap? Is it important?”
Why
is she asking that question, Mallory thought annoyedly. But instead of
saying that, she just repeated, “It’s my favorite cap. I can’t go home without
it.”
Little Pat ran up to Mallory, eyes wide.
“You’re missing your cap?” When Mallory nodded her head, his eyes opened even
wider. “Then you have to stay here until you find it!” He ran off again.
Wondering what on earth he was talking about, Mallory started at him
bewilderedly.
Danny sat on the ground, looking out over
the potato field. He scratched his head gloomily. Beside him on the ground was
a small black cap with a red feather in it. He sat that way for a long time.
Finally he got up, buried the cap next to a big stone, and slowly walked back
to the cottage, which was just over the hill.
When he opened the door, a scene of chaos
confronted him. His brother and grandmother were looking in cupboards and under
the bed and table. Mallory was with them, nervously biting her lip. When she
saw Danny standing in the doorway, she rushed over to him.
“Have you seen my cap? It’s missing.” She
looked up at him with wide blue eyes. “Have you?”
Danny swallowed. He hadn’t expected to be
directly confronted by a merrow. Instead of answering, he averted his eyes and
avoided the question. “You’re missing your cap? Then just stay until ye find
it. Sure, we’ll find it soon; how can it hide, with all of us looking for it?”
Halfheartedly he joined in the search, avoiding his grandmother’s enquiring
looks.
Mallory was near despair. How could her
cap just disappear like that? And it was her favorite one, too. She and her
mother had picked it out in New York, before they got on the ship to Ireland.
Mallory couldn’t bear to lose that cap. But her mother would be so worried
about her! She bit her lip, mournfully looking at everyone fruitlessly
searching.
Now she saw Erin coming over to her. The
elderly lady gave her a concerned glance. “Would ye like to stay here until we
find it?”
Mallory looked at Erin’s grandmotherly
face, and decided. She spoke up quietly but firmly. “I will stay here one more
day. Then, if we haven’t found it, I’ll go home anyway.”
“Ye’ll go home without it?” There was such
an incredulous note in Erin’s voice that Mallory narrowed her eyes in surprise.
“Why, yes I will. Is there a problem with
that?” There was a suspicious tone in Mallory’s voice.
Erin shook her head hastily, “No, no,
there’s no problem, no,” and turned back to her searching. Mallory closed her
eyes in frustration. Everyone was so bewildering here!
The next morning Mallory got ready to go.
She was disappointed that she hadn’t found her cap, but she was sure that she
needed to go back. Her mother would be worried sick about her. Erin and Pat
watched her solemnly. Danny had gone off somewhere by himself. Finally Mallory
put her shawl on the bed. She turned to Erin and smiled.
“Thank you for letting me stay here, Mrs.
O’Keefe. You’ve been very kind, and I won’t forget you.” She hugged and kissed
the old woman.
Danny came in the door just as Mallory
turned to little Pat. Pat looked at her with wide, solemn eyes.
“You’re leaving?” he asked. Mallory
nodded.
“Yes, I am leaving now.”
“Without your cap?”
“Without my cap.”
The little boy looked at Mallory
wistfully. “You’re not a merrow, then, are you?”
Mallory’s hand flew to her mouth and she
gave a small gasp. A smile started at the corners of her mouth and she gave an
incredulous laugh. “You thought I was a merrow?” Then another thought came into
her mind, and she blushed, looking at Danny. Her voice was now more subdued.
“Is…that…why my cap went missing?”
Now it was Danny’s turn to blush. Stammering,
he looked down and shuffled his feet. Then he turned and went out again.
Dumbfounded, Mallory watched him go. Then
she whirled on Erin. “Did you know about this?”
The old woman shrugged sheepishly. “Sure,
an’ we all thought ye were a merrow. The lad thought ye were pretty.”
Mallory blushed again. “Well…that’s nice…”
She sighed and looked at Erin. “Please can we just go now?’
Erin agreed and soon they were on their
way to a hill from which you could see the ocean. After they had been walking
for a while, Danny came running up behind them. They reached the top of the
hill, and Mallory’s eyes lit up.
“Oh! I know where I am now! Thank you for…
everything.” She turned to go.
“Wait!” The call stopped her in her tracks
and she turned back to look at Danny, who had uttered the call.
“What?” she asked.
Danny bit his lip and looked down. Then he
held out Mallory’s cap to her, a little more battered and dusty than it had
been.
“Here’s your cap. Sure, an’ I’m sorry I
took it.” His face was a mixture of nervousness and regret.
Mallory took a deep breath. Then she
handed the cap back to Danny. “Thank you, Danny. It was noble of you to give it
back. But you can keep it.”
Wonder grew in his eyes. “Truly?”
“Truly. So you don’t forget me.” Mallory
sighed sadly. “Goodbye.” And she turned and went down the hill toward the
seaside town you could see in the distance.
And Erin, Danny, and Pat went back down to
their cottage, without looking back.
“Is
that all, Grandma?” I asked anxiously. Grandma had never told me this story
before, and I couldn’t believe that the tale would end there. “What happened
next? Did Danny and Mallory ever see each other again? You can’t just
end it there!”
Grandma
smiled. “No, Erin, that isn’t the end. Three years later, a young woman of
nineteen, who was dressed in black, walked slowly through the streets of
Dublin, Ireland. Suddenly she saw a young farmer pushing a wheelbarrow full of
potatoes. She ran over to him…
“Danny! It’s good to see you again!” the
woman cried. The farmer looked up, amid the bustle, wonder in his eyes.
“Mallory? You’re…here?” He glanced at her
black clothes. “Did someone die?”
She nodded slowly, a tear welling in her
eye. “My mother. She died two months ago. I had to come here for business
concerning her will. I had no idea I would see you here.” She smiled sadly.
Although she didn’t tell Danny, Mallory was the heir to a small fortune in
America.
Danny nodded sympathetically. “Sure, I am
sorry. My grandmother died two years ago. Pat and I get along all right. I came
here to see what the price of potatoes was in Dublin. Unfortunately, not much!
Faith, I had no idea I would see you here either, but I shouldn’t have been
surprised. Everyone knows merrows can show up in the strangest places sometimes.”
Mallory blushed. “Danny! You didn’t really
think I was… a merrow. Anyway sir,” she went on demurely, “You had my cap. I
couldn’t return to the sea.”
Danny smiled mischievously. “Ah, but ye’re
still as fair as colleen as ever I saw.”
Mallory laughed. “You certainly have the
gift of blarney!” The two of them started reminiscing, and later, when they
went their separate ways, both of them felt a little happier. Mallory had told
Danny about her estate in America, and he had paid close attention, although
Mallory hadn’t realized.
Mallory went back to America the next
week. Danny had visited her a few times, but it seemed they were to be parted
again for a long time. To her surprise, two Irish visitors showed up on her
doorstep after a few months.
“Were
they Danny and Pat, Grandma?” I asked. She nodded slowly.
“Yes,
Erin, they were. Danny had come to ask Mallory to marry him.”
“Really?”
I squealed. “Did she say yes?”
Grandma
smiled. “What do you think she said, little colleen? Of course she said yes! She
and Danny got married the next year. And when their first child, a daughter,
was born, they named her Erin.”
“Erin
like me?” I asked.
“No,
Erin. Erin like your great great grandmother.”
My
mouth dropped open as I realized what she was saying. “You mean Danny and
Mallory were your mom and dad? Really? “
“Yes,
child. I am Erin, and your mother is Erin, and you are Erin. Erin has been a
family name for five generations.”
“Oh,
grandma,” I murmured as I snuggled into the blankets on my bed, “that was the
best story ever!”
Great story!! Haha, glad I could finish the rest of it after Hills Alive!! ;)
ReplyDeleteyeah, I did sort of leave you hanging there. I'm glad you like it. :D
DeleteIt was GREAT!! =D
DeleteThanks! :)
DeleteYou're welcome!!!!!! =D
DeleteDear Piano,
ReplyDeleteWow that was really great I enjoyed it a lot
but I do wish it could have been longer maybe
you can write a second part of the in between parts
where Mallory has adventures in Ireland or maybe
you could write more on little Erin.
Your Friend
Poem Girl
Dear Poem Girl,
DeleteThanks for the ideas! I will have to think about doing that. When I was writing it, I was trying for a short story, but I could make it longer, add parts, things like that.
Piano Bookworm
Oh, this is a lovely tale! So enjoyable to read; you certainly did a wonderful job. ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch! =D
DeleteAhh... that was sweet! :D
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mallory!
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